Patterns of Error

•    The first error i see in my writing so far is that i tend to make a lot of grammar mistakes. i tend to confuse or misspell words. I also forget to put comes before FANBOYS. I also tend to sometimes have some run- on sentences. I can also be wordy by using describing a process by saying "and then", i also use the words "i guess" and even "in my opinion".
•    Another error i see in my writing would have to be that i don't always make my thesis clear enough. Although sometimes i believe it makes sense, it the end it only makes sense to me. i need to be able to explain my thesis better. I also have a problem with coming up with my own titles. i am not able to make my own titles and usually put anything and ignore it.
•    Another error i see in my writing would have to be that i am not able to be clear in my paper. i have ideas scatter all over the place. Although it makes sense to me it can be confusing for people who are reading my paper. People usually get confuse when i am talking about something and suddenly move to another point. i need to be more clear on the points i am trying to make. i need to be able to organize my ideas better, so my paper can have a better flow and people can understand it better.