For my portfolio i chose to rewrite my ad analysis essay. My strengths of my ad analysis essay was that i had many good points and i had good attempt at my thesis statement. My weakness of my paper was that my points were all over the place and i didn't organize my ideas. Also i could have had a stronger thesis.
When i revise my essay i will state my thesis more clearly. Once my thesis is clearly stated i can then organize my ideas better to better support my points. i will try to make myself think about the ad more effectively. I need to think outside the box and make questions to myself. I need to analyze more critically.
I will try to make a connection to my claims , ideas, and points to the text. I will not make myself go off topic and always try to connect my ideas to the text to make myself more trustworthy. i also will add more descriptive details to my essay to make the audience see what i see in the ad.
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